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A/N: this will have a touchy subject for some people, strong language, gore and just sad stuff. Don't like? Don't read! Thank you!

“Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.”
― Martin Luther King Jr., A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches

You ran. Not caring where, how fast you were going or what you bumped into.

You just ran.

*Flash Back*

"And stay up there you little bitch!" your drunken father shouted while slamming your bedroom door. You hated him. He hut you and your mother whenever he was drunk. And when he wasn't, he would ignore you both. Your mother always tried to protect you, but he was too strong.

You could hear your mother. She was crying and telling him to leave you alone. You heard her crying in pain as he hit her too. You threw your little fist against the hardwood door and shouted at him. You listened to loud thumps travel up your stairs and to your room. He kicked open the door, sending you flying backwards. Your father hit you with a broom over and over again, calling you filth.

Soon enough, you lay unconscious in a small pool of blood and numb from pain. You father closed your door and locked it. He went back down to your mother. Only to hear her yelp in pain. He rushed over to her. Drenched in blood and beaten to death.

But he didn't kill her.

"So," a dark voice made him look up into bloody eyes. "you're the one causing all the racket." he said with a sinister smirk.
Before your father had any time to react, a baseball bat was bashed across his head.

He was dead.

You woke up about an hour later. Wincing from pain as you did so. The whole house was silent. This silence scared you more than the shouting.

You jiggled the lock with a bobby pin as you did so often and swiftly excited the room. As you made your way down the steep stairs, you noticed a lot of red.

No, blood.
You rushed down the steps and stood in shock as to what you saw. Your father, his head bashed open. Your mother suffered a similar fate. You could tell her death was a lesser sentence. Compared to your father, it looked like she had a scratch.
But that didn't change the fact that they were both dead.

"M-mommy?" you said coming closer to her corpse. "Mommy!" you cried shaking her body. Hoping she was only sleeping. But it was too late for her.

You were scared, frantic, and mortified. You stood and quickly ran. You bolted down the street as fast as your little legs could carry you. Being in only a thin white and blood stained night gown, you shivered violently.

You didn't care.

You just kept running.

*End Of Flash Back*

You made your way into a dark alley. Tears making your vision fuzzy, you trudged on. Your little legs finally gave out and you tumbled to the ground. Not even bothering to get up again.
'I don't care anymore.' you thought grimly. You were ready to die, here and now.

"Yo kid! What the hell ya doing out here?" you shifted your gaze to the obnoxious voice before you. He was  a tall man with deep auburn hair with a cowlick and blood red eyes hidden behind dark shades. He wore a dark bomber jacket and carried a baseball bat decorated in nails. He looked down at you with a confused look, cleverly masked by a smirk.

"Nothing." you responded blankly, causing his smirk to grow. You felt a pair of hands go under your arms and yourself being lifted from the ground.

You could see his bright red eyes slightly shift as he looked you over.
"Well, ain't you a trooper!" he laughed. You stared at him, un amused. "What are you doing out at such a dangerous time of night, hm?" he gave a toothy grin.

You still stared at him as you tried to process everything that happened to you tonight. But you could only think of two words to sum it up.

"They're dead."

"Who?" he asked incredulously.

"Mom and dad." he looked at you that could be classified as pity, but he was too scary to pull it off.

"What about you kid? You look pretty fucked." you glared at the ground with your (e/c) orbs.

"Dad never liked me very much." you said coldly. He laughed. He actually laughed.

"You don't seem too bad kid. And if that's coming from me, take it seriously." you lazily stared at him.
"The names Al. What about you kid?"

"________." you answered plainly.

"Alright ________, how about I take you home with me."

"Do I have a choice?" you asked sarcastically. He looked surprised at your sassy-ness. Especially for a four year old. He chuckled and said.

"Nope." he pulled you closer to him so he was carrying you so your head could rest on his shoulder. You drew into the warmth he offered, nuzzling your head into his neck. He slung his bat over his shoulder and proceeded to walk to his home with you in tow.
Well it has finally begun! After a majority vote, this one comes first! This is my first 2p! so be nice!
Anyway, I hope I made him Al-ish enough. thank you for reading!
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part 2! [link]
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So you just killed my mum and dad, then you meet a small child saying her mum and dad are dead.


xxScribbleChanxx Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist
Supernatural - Paranoid Dean  KAWAII
MissOcarina2 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ny mama was murdered by America.
I run out to the streets.
I meet a man named Al.
he has a bat with nails and blood on it.

Bluemoonteardrop134 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Agreed :D
MissOcarina2 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Hetalian-Canada Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oliver, please don't poison me!
shakugan46 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
KAWAII DESU !!!!!!!!
Storm-Depomiere Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Well this seems pretty good! Let's see how Al does as a daddy! Just don't let Oliver give me cupcakes~ Even though Oliver's my fav 2p!
chickenchica Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is the best reader insert I have ever read, it's now my favorite! Just can't get over reading it, great job!
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've been kidnap by 2p America !!!!
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh I Like this already
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If Al is my new father-figure, I will get you a Hetaloid. I am serious. I will invent them, and give you one!
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
sweet, thanks! :D
LunaAngel-Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD No prob!
Britain-and-Paris Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
so... he asks me if i'll come home with him but he was gonna take me anyway.... well not that i would have said no =3=
SirenDollofDeath Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student General Artist
-sarcasticly- aww that's nice kill me mum then take me home, real nice al really kind of ye
Profile192115 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
I have something for you, well, I'm not really sure what to call it, but I've been looking around this website, and I've noticed a lack of two things
-Rosario vampire x reader stories
-original soul eater stories
Rosario vampire from what I know isn't very common And soul eater does not have a lot of variety (it's kinda sorta repetitive) so, I'm sending out a challenge of sorts to writers on here who have a lot of nice stories and I'm positive they'd come up with an awesome idea. I don't want to call it a contest because I'm not sure how those work on here.....but, I though it could be cool to see what people come up with!
This is just a suggestion, and if you aren't interested, or are too busy, then pay no mind to it. (And thanks for reading it all if you did, sorry I know it's a lot)
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nah it's cool! I dont really know what Rosario vampire is but I noticed a lack in soul eater. When I have the time I will do what I can :)
Cascata-Zion Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Photographer
How old am I?
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i think i made you like 4-6 years old.....I cant remember :P
Kotetsufan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Four maybe five? I'm guessing *shrugs*
LolizaChan Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Bear Emoji-08 (Rolling Love) [V1] 
DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Llama Emoji-09 (Drinking Tea) [V1] Llama Emoji-02 (Blush) [V1]  kawaii
Noriva Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn I was sassy even when I was a kid! FUDGE YEAH! :iconyeahplz:
kidallen Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"What about you kid? You look pretty fucked." Yea, Probably After My Parents Died, Oh But Not Before My Dad Beat Me,AGAIN. Al's Sooo Oblivious, Isn't He
KiaRyland Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
naruto-hetalia-here Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
this is my secound time im reading this!
SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Beat that 
LadyMidnight123 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is my 20th, aru! 
SpikeyMacksy Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
I'm up to my 7th, I keep on coming back. :3
katcraft455 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
O-oh my god... T-this is making m-me think a 2p is h-hot... Oh god what's happening!!
gymleader97 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Okay Reader-Chan ish Badass right now, she doesn't even care. XD
SchrodingerFan14 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Eeeew so cute! >ω<
Animelover121767 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
This is perfect
Mewnekoice Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Filmographer
Awesome 2p!america
TsumesWolf Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Lillianalicerose Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
I don't mind belonging to 2p America but more of in erotic maid type way America would be my dad and 2p him would be the other thing
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Azalea:*fist pump*HELL YES.

Japan:Prease,Kyushu-chan,wirr you carm down?


Me:*pats Azalea on the back*It's okay..

Belladonna:Isn't it weird me and Azalea are named after poisonous flowers?

Me:....*listens in Einsamkeit instead of answering*OH MY GAWD THEY CAN SING SO WELL...

Belladonna:*takes an earbud,puts it in her ear,then listens too*Hmm....Even though I'm German I'm related to nobody.Weird much?Anyway...I like how they sing too.

Azalea:*pouts*Englands mine,ya know.

Me:I call Prussia!

Belladonna:*stares at me*Threesome?

Me:*stares*No...Okay then...I call Germany!

Belladonna:I call dibs on Prussia.

Maikoa:....Romano is mine.America is too,but I doubt Dad would like it.

Me:OH YEAH.You're Russia's daughter,right?

Maikoa:Da.*tugs on scarf*He gave me this.

Me:*pokes scarf*

Maikoa:NO.*Russia aura*My.Scarf.

Me:WAAAAHHH IM SORRY!!But...why is it black?

Maikoa:*calms down*I like the color black.And it has red ends,too.*reaches behind,grabs scarf,and shows end*

Me:So...about your dad...

Maikoa:Yeah....him and America have been enemies after the whole Cold War thing...He tells me no,I say whatever,and then randomly,I'm here and I'm calling dibs.Anyway~,I still call dibs on Roma.

Me:Right!Now,because we've settled that...I like this story.

Azalea:Yeah.It's good.

Maikoa:Da.I like it.

Belladonna.Ja,ja....whatever...It's nice....I guess...
mizukinight Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
To read him being nice is shocking. Nice job on the story.
HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

laurendiecry12 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
who dosent want a murder for a father?
Forest6654 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Easier to keep the jackasses that want to date you away
laurendiecry12 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Student Filmographer
Agreed :3
Forest6654 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DRM13 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
gahhhhhhh, i love it and imma keep reading now!!! i love the concept of this XD a new side to Al!!!
zimfan12 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013
Me: do I have a choice?
Al: Nope
KagomeAmii Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Student Writer
He farted?
zimfan12 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
*tilts head in confusion* 
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