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"It's over." the sandy blond man said bluntly.

"W-what?" you asked as tears begun to form in the corners of your big (e/c) eyes. You two were happily eating dinner at your apartment.

The American pushed up his glasses that had become askew. "I'm just not into you anymore," he rose from his chair and headed for the door. "to be honest, I never really was into you." and with those final heart crushing words, he left.

You and the American boy named Alfred have been dating for the past 2 years. Things have always gone so great! You loved him and he loved you. Or so you thought.

Now you sit in your chair. Too stunned to move or feel the hot tears running down your cheeks. What did you do? What happened to cause this?

Thousands of questions raced through your mind. You stood up and stumbled to your bedroom, flopped on the bed and cried your eyes out.


----Alfred P.O.V-----


I closed _______'s door behind me and sank to the floor. I can't believe I actually broke up with her! Just because everyone else said she was an outcast and a loser. I let the words get to me. They said it would ruin my rep at school. They started to laugh at me for eating lunch with her, when I carried her books for her, or even when I talked to her.

_____ was always bullied at school. All she had to do was show up and someone would find something snide to say about her.

She lost her parents about a year ago too. So she started living on her own. We have been friends since we were kids. I remember when she used to smile so much. Now, it was rare to even see her grin.

I feel now, I have only made things worse.

I still love her.

---Time Skip-----


I'm really worried about ______ now. She hasn't shown up for school in a week. I was changing for my baseball game when one of my teammates clapped my shoulder.

"So, you finally ditched that dork! I'm proud of ya!" he said laughing. I ground my teeth in annoyance.

"I can't believe still that you went out with her! I guessing it was all out of pity, right Al-" I cut him off by slamming him into the locker.

"Shut up." I growled. They all looked at me shocked. I never got angry at them no matter what. I grabbed his collar and stormed out of the locker room.

"Vhere are you going?!" called Gilbert. The white haired male had been one of the only ones to approve of mine and ______'s relationship.

"Fixing my mistake." I called back running down the hall.

I looked back to see the Prussian man smile at me.

----Time Skip-----

I quickly ran home to find my older brother Arthur. He would know what to do.

I burst through the front door and found him in the kitchen with a tea kettle in his hand.
"Dude! I need your help!" I said coming closer to him.

He sighed before answering. "What did you break now Alfred?"

I shook my head. "No! I didn't break anything! I miss _______. I didn't want to break up with her. What do I do?" I said almost in tears just from thinking about her.

Arthur and ______ were good friends. They were in book club together. He's the one who introduced us in the first place.

"Have you heard from her lately? She hasn't even been at school." I say sadly.

Arthur looked at me for a minute then rolled his green eyes. "Why do you care so much about her?" I stared at him shocked.

"What?" I asked in disbelief.

"Why do you care? She is the nerdy kid a school and has no friends. She doesn't play sports and is almost as quiet as Matthew. She isn't worth your time-"

I punched him.

Hard.

"Shut up! How dare you say that about ______?! She's the kindest and smartest person I know! So what if she doesn't play sports or is quiet! And screw my rep! And she does have friends! She has you and Matt!" I breathed hard before I passed out from yelling that in one breath. Wow. I have never yelled so much in one day. Unless it's the fun kind of yelling.
Arthur looked at me and smiled. "If you never really cared, would you have defended her? Would you have stuck up for her like that? I don't think so."

I blinked bewilderedly. "When did I ever tell you I didn't care about her?"

"You didn't. ______ did. She called me about an hour after you broke up with her." Arthur said calmly. He rose off the marble floor and went to the freezer pulling out an ice pack and held it to his purpling eye. "Bloody hell you hit hard." he mumbled.

"Wait, she called you?! Is she okay?!" I shouted in panic.

Arthur sighed and shook his head. "You hurt her Alfred Jones." he said sternly. He walked over to me and pushed me out the front door. "Now go fix this wanker!"

And so he ran, but not without making a quick stop first.

-----Your P.O.V-------


Crying.

That's basically all you have done since Alfred broke up with you. Why did he anyway? Was he worried about his rep? Probably. 'No one wants to date a loser like me' you thought to yourself.

You sit on your old worn couch. Knees to your chest as more sobs rack through you. At this point you couldn't care less about school or social life. Not that you really had a social life.

You hadn't eaten much in the past week. Some fish crackers here and there, but nothing else. You had no appetite for anything. The thought of food made you sick to your stomach. Since the break up, you took one shower and that was this morning. You thought 'it's kinda cold out for today, maybe if I sit out there with wet hair long enough I freeze to death.'

As you sat there is a sad silence, a loud knock arose from the door. You groaned and shouted. "Go away! No one's home!"

"Sorry babe. It's me so you know that's not gonna happen!" your (e/c) eyes widened. Alfred? What was he doing here?

"Oh in that case, GO AWAY!!" You shouted at the door and threw a book at it. You heard him sigh. Then a loud crash boomed throughout your apartment. Your head quickly (and dizzily) shot up as you watched your door fly off the hinges. "WHAT THE HELL?!" you screamed.

Alfred casually walked through you front door and saw you. His baby blue eyes widened with sadness. You were much thinner than before. You were also paler too. Your (h/l) (h/c) was a mess and your once sparkly (e/c) eyes now dull with puffy redness.

"_-____?!" he asked in disbelief. Had he really done this to you?

You sniffled. "What do you want Alfred?" your eyes teary.
Next thing you knew you were engulfed in a bone crushing hug. "I'm so sorry." Alfred whispered holding you tighter. "I lied to you. I love you. I love you more than anything. I was a dumbass and forgot how much you really mean to me. I have always care but I let my ego get in the way. I want you back ______." He lifted up your tear stained face to his. "Please."

You completely broke down. You  latched yourself to him and cried. He wrapped his arms tighter around you and kissed your forehead.

"Shhh, it's okay now _______." he cooed in your ear but you shook your head.

"Who do I know that you won't leave me again?" you said, tears streaming down your face. Alfred reached in to his back pocket and pulled out a small velvet box. "Aren't you a little young to be proposing?" you sniffled. He chuckled and open the box and pulled out a small ring and slid it own your ring finger.

"It's nothing like that. It's a promise ring. This means that no matter what, I from now on promise to love you and stay with you." He pulled you to him and placed a passionate kiss on your cold lips. You quickly returned it and wrapped your arms around his neck.

"I love you." You said when you finally broke apart.

"I love you too." Alfred said resting his forehead on yours.

"Promise?"

He lifted your hand to his and kissed the ring. "I promise."
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"Alfred,"

"Yeah babe?"

"You owe me a new door."
Hey! I'm alive! sort of... so its been two days since my grandpa funral and I'm still a mess. But I write when I;m sad so I thought I woul throw something up there. I hope you liked it! please comment~
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Russia-Chan4117 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016  Student Writer
i would'nt have forgiven him that easily if he wanted my affection he woulda had to earn it. I'm just that evil. 👿👿👿👿👿👿

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LunariaMay Featured By Owner Edited Dec 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Alfred?

Alfred: Yeah babe?

Me: You owe me a new door.

Aflred: ...W-what are you t-talking about..? Y-you don't need it...

Me: Alfred... *frown*

Alfred: Honestly, it j-just makes it easier-

Me: Alfred!

Alfred: W-what..?

Me: Why are you avoiding the problem? *Scary angry face*

Alfred: U-uhm....B-because uhh...

Me: Because what Alfred?

Alfred: B-because I may or may not h-have s-pent all my money o-on some McD's...

Me: ... *Russian death glare*

Alfred: ...

Me: ...

Alfred: (Y-y/n)...You're s-scaring me...

Me: *creepy smile* I will murder you. :D

Alfred: N-no you w-won't...You l-love me..?

Me: ...





....You are the best writer. xD I couldn't help but write this quick scenario for it. :3 ...................Now give me my door or I will murder you like I did to Alfred. :D
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Olympia7 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That is so me at the end we have a heart touching moment then bam i want a new door or elso you meet choppy the katana
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Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Yep you did that to me once.....still need that door lil sis ^^;
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Olympia7 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yes....yes i do
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Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Oh dear...
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Olympia7 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
choppy the katana is getting really excited to see you ~
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Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
Oh god LIl sis please spare me Kitty begging France (Begging to England) [V3] 
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Olympia7 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
fine ..but i still want that door 
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Hetaliafangirl756 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  New Deviant Student Photographer
kay..
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Angel-Loves-Anime Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I love that end
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LadyMarbleKiller Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
I.WANT.MY.DOOR.....or else your gon' have meeting with my metal pipe. 
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Author-Chan11 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2015
(I know this is late) Oh my God, you just made my night. XD
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LittleMissRookie Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Door. Now. 
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space-unicorn-32 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
I want MAH door
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FangirlingToTheMax Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015
Fish crackers... That's my reputation at school. Giving fish crackers at random people,esp. my classmates.. Great story,tho!
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TheGreenPigeon Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2015
Wh-What? What's a fish cracker?
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FangirlingToTheMax Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2016
Its famous in my town, it has a sweet-and-spicy flavour, and you might get addicted to it. Heh.
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xxmorningflarexx Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
The door part was the best 😂😂
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AlexSpecialMaple Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
he better get me my new door..... or else :ninjastar: revamp America (Eating Hamburger) [V1] 
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Bunnygoblin Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015
Punch him....then take him back.
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cupcakedragons Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're fanfics make me cry ALMOST EVERY FLIPPING TIME! ;-;
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Deceivertale Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
'Go away. nobody's home' I died lauging at that part XD
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DestinyMace Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You owe me a new door.
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Queenelsa108 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 29, 2015  Professional Photographer
Noooooo door I love you!!!! We have had so many good times together! Don't die on me! I love youuuuuuuu!!!!!Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Waaaah! Nuu Rage 

I NEED THAT DOOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!Peek DOOR SLAM I Never See You Anymore Hello?    I love you Jack open the door 
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Student Artist
When I saw Patrick I lost it X3 that all you have to do Alfred
1.go to the door
2.knock on the door untill they come out
3. Say 'I love you'
78. Put chocolate in their face and walk away :3
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Queenelsa108 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2015  Professional Photographer
haha yeah
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015  Student Artist
try it c:
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WolfdogTheKiller Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
The ending lol!!! this story is amazing
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You. Owe. Me. A. Door. Punk.
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DORY! *runs over to my door*
Plz don't leave me!
Remember all the memories!
*when I met dory*
*when I fixed her handle
*when I varnished her*
*when I oiled her hinges*
*when I painted her*
*when we went to Disneyland*

R.I.P. Dory

a door that opened up everyone's hearts

2014-2014
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Student Artist
R.I.P DORY
'AAAAANNNNNNDDDDD IIIIIIII EH IIIIIII WIL ALWAYS LUUUUUUVVV UUUUUUUU DORRRYYYY' *complelty fail* NAILED IT :3
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Student Artist
X3
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
pewdie!!!!!!!
felix: *rubs ear* what? woman?
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Artist
i dun know
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Artist
i must fly to my ice cream people!
//flies to icecream people
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DB4Lyfe Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
She kept us warm in the winter, cool in the summer
She protected us from criminals and the BTT
She will live on in our hearts, as the most beautiful and caring door ever
Doraline Marie Handleson, a door, a protector, and a dreamer
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
gil spain and franeh get over here now before I murder a bitch.
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
And may she rest in piece in the big DIY store in the sky
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
laughing head off
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DON'T LEAVE ME INTERNET PERSON WHO REPLIED!
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
is now dead
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dammit...
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
randomly comes back to life What did I miss? smiles
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh y'know dancing on your grave and crap
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FeliciaVargas16 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, I like dancing~

(Felicia is oblivious to... everything. xD)
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ArisaKZ Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
:. 1f 1 could like comments... .:
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
😄⭐️🍩
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