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A/N: cussing, sad stuff dont like dont read

The next week, Alfred dragged you from your home and back to school. But, not before helping you heal yourself.

-----Flash Back------

A loud knock assulted your door.

"Good Morning _______! It's time to get up!"

You groaned. "Go home Jones!" you shouted back.

He laughed and kicked open your door and waltzed into your bedroom. He lift you up in his arms and kissed your forehead. "There is no time for that now ______! We have a big week planned before you go back to school!"

Your (e/c) snapped open. "What?! I'm not going back there!" you yelled thrashing in his arms. He was unaffected and continued.

"First and for most, I'm going to help you getting your eating habits back on track and but you some *bio oil for your scars."

You scowled and looked away. "Why are you doing this?"

Alfred smiled and kissed you softly. You watched his eyes flutter closed as he pressed his lips harder to your. He pulled away and stared dreamily into your eyes. "Because I love you!" he smiled wide as he watched you blush a light pink.

Alfred let you to go get changed, mentioning something about "grabbing some McD's". You wandered into the bathroom and rummaged around for your diet pills only to find they had been replaced with candy. You growled.


You could hear Alfred laugh. "You never needed them so I threw them away!"

You growled in annoyance and felt extremely stressed and self conscience. You went under your sink and searched for your razor blade. It was replaced with a children's play knife. No edge at all.

"GOD DAMN IT JONES!" you shouted while he laughed.

He strolled into the bathroom and hugged you from behind. "You are too beautiful to hurt yourself." He nuzzled into your neck and kissed it softly. "Now c'mon. We have food to eat and eyebrows to see!"

"What do you mean by 'eyebrows'?"

"Arthur! He's been worried about you too." he smiled.

You looked at him dumbfounded. Arthur was worried? seriously? Yes, you two could be considered 'friends' but really.

-------McDonalds Time Skip------

After pigging out on many burgers, Alfred drove you over to Arthurs house. When we got there, Arthur was sitting on his Victorian style porch. He looked up and his green eyes widened. He set down his cup and rushed over to Alfred red volvo. As soon as you got out, he engulfed you in a hug.

"_______, I was so worried about you! I tried calling and going over but you never answered." you shyly wrapped your arms around him. "I'm so sorry I didn't do something sooner." he whispered holding you tighter.

You held back tears and let him hold you. You didn't notice Alfred glaring at Arthur.
The Brit kissed your forehead. "I hope you're feeling better now, love."

You smiled a little. "Thank you..."

---Flash Back End-----
You and Alfred walked down the crowded school hallway. Even after all your attempts to push his arm off of your shoulders, it still found its way around you.

Everyone gave you both strange looks. Including your teachers. You both walked into class and Alfred sat right beside you.

That teacher from last week walked into the room. He saw you and snarled. You don't know why he hated you so much. You were a straight A student and tried not to cause any trouble.

"What are you doing back?" he growled.

You stared at your black shoes.

"Leave her alone you old hack." Alfred spat. The teacher glared at him.

"How dare you talk to me like that Alfred Jones!"

"How dare you take to my girlfriend like that is a better question!" everyone in the room including you gasped. Girlfriend?

The teacher was flabbergasted. "Get out of my classroom! Both of you!" he shouted.

Alfred glared at him and pulled you by your hand out the door, ignoring all the whispered that followed.

---Time Skip-----

Alfred didn't leave your side all day. He griped out anyone who looked at you strangely, and snapped at his friends when they questioned your relationship.

You were currently waiting outside the boys locker room for Alfred so he could get his things from practise. You held your (book of choice) close to your face as you read.

Suddenly it was ripped out of your hands. "Hey!" you complained. You looked up to see the biggest bully in the entire school. (Random Bitch Name) and her gang.

"What the hell are you doing out here you little slut!" (R/B/N) shrieked. You looked at her boredly, unable to take her crap anymore.

"I'm waiting, and I was doing so in peace until you interrupted me. Please leave."

She huffed. "You think you're so hot now that your dating Alfred."

You rolled your eyes at her. "Not really, I'm still the same person."

"So you admit you're a loser!"

"Are fucking deaf?" you asked eerily calm. "The only people around here who call me that are you guys, and I'm fucking tired of it! You are all really stupid aren't you! Fucking whores." they all pulled down them hems of their frilly pink skirts.

"W-whatever! You're still a freak!"

"Says the bitch who's dressed like a pink toilet brush." you sneered. "I'm done with you treating me like crap all the time. I done with it!" you stormed down the hall.

"Where do you think you're going?!" (R/B/N) shouted.

Glared at her then smirked. "Anywhere your fake nose isn't!" and you walked out. Like a badass.

-----Time Skip-------

"_______!" Alfred called you. He huffed as he finally reached you. He heard you fighting with the girls and watched you leave. So on instinct, he followed you.

He grabbed your arm and spun you to face him. He pulled your face to his and pressed his lips to yours. His soft lips melted against yours. He pulled away and held you close.

"_______, I love you. I think, no, I KNOW you are the most beautiful woman I have ever met. I know I have been the biggest hoser on the planet for a long time but I still love you. You're kind and caring. Smart and funny. And your smile is so beautiful it's contagious. Please, I need to know. Do you love me too?"

You stared up to him. Your big (e/c) eyes shone bright and glistened with tears. He had done so much for you in this past week. He told off his friends for you, stayed with you, held your hand in front of others and he let you cry on his shoulder when you were sad.

You let your arms wrap around his neck and pulled him into a kiss. He smiled into it and held you tighter. For once, you kissed him back. Your lips moved in sync with each others. When you finally broke the kiss you stared into his baby blue eyes.

"Alfred F Jones, you are probably the biggest asshole I have ever met." His face fell. "You tormented me for so many years that I nearly killed myself." He looked on the verge of tears. "But, you were also the only one to really try to help me, get to know me and heal my scars. I can never forget all those terrible years, but I sure can ignore them for the good ones." you took his face in your hands. HIs grip around your waist tightened. "Alfred F Jones, I believe I'm in love with you."

He smiled so wide you thought it might get stuck like that. Alfred lifted you off your feet and spun you in a circle while smashing his lips to yours.

“The truth is, unless you let go, unless you forgive yourself, unless you forgive the situation, unless you realize that the situation is over, you cannot move forward.”
― Steve Maraboli, Life, the Truth, and Being Free
UGGGGH this took me forever to do. I got another job so I'm like everywhere right now. So much to do! Thank you all for requesting a sequel! so awesome of you sorry if its not as good!

If you follow my hetalia x child! Venice! Reader the second part will be up this week

i own nothing but the plot line
:iconsexyamerica2plz: owns you!

thanks again!
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Hetalia123Harmony Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I cried, no seriously...
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  New member
For (R/B/N)

I chose TheHomoWhoCan'tMindHerOwnDamnedBitchyBusiness.

Yes, I chose that.
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Student Artist
The name is... PERFECT
Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  New member
Thank youu~
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student Artist
your welcome~ c:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Student Filmographer
I used to get bullied T^T
People calling me chipmunk because im a bit tan and have chubbier cheeks than them...
But this story made my day ^-^!
ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  New member
Its ok coz ur special I get called stupid by my bff coz I'm random but I'm smart they just can't see past the wall...
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
Im pretty sure u are smart ^^
ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  New member
That's what they all say but don't let em get you down ^^
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  New member Student Filmographer
Awwie ur so fluffy
Rivulets-of-Blood Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, after that last comment in part 1 of this story, and after I stopped tearing up, I've finally calmed down enough to assess this story properly! ... All I can say is how much I love this story. It's empowering in its own right and inspiring as well. And I love how well it reflects on every day situations many people have to go through, hanging in the precarious balance between suicide and plain hatred. Because though I've bullied, though not to this extremity, I understand just how much pain people go through to this day. And because I have personal experience of self-hate and suicidal thoughts, though not the cutting because it scares me to death, I have a thorough appreciation and love for this story. Keep working your magic my friend!

:sad:  :crying: rvmp .........:( (Sad) :| (Blank Stare) :) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) 
Itzcc Featured By Owner Edited Nov 22, 2014
I used to get bullied by my so called friends. They'd always tell me how unbelievably terrible my outfit was that day, and make sure to tease any boy I like saying 'watch out.' But I do wish I could stand up to them like the reader in this book. And yes, I have self harmed and thought of suicide, but never did it.
KieikoAirya Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You'know, next time they do this to you tell them to p--- off. they're not your friends and if they have to bully you like that then they don't deserve to hang out with you.
AoTLover345 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014   Digital Artist
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
I've been bullied this passing month.....I had even convice myself to kill my own person, I had to go to counciling for it.....jerk bastard boys.....don't give a shit 'bout my fucking feeling dont they.....somehow I haven't snapped....well only mentally.....this was a beautiful....cause it showed me that whatever people say 'bout me, and for me to not give a fuck and forget the mean words being thrown at me and that I know that some one out there will love me for who I am!

Also I can walk down hall ways liek a boss so dem bitches be jealous....I kid I'm not cool XD
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
im so glad this story has helped you!! Honestly, the best way to piss off a bully (legally) is to make sure they know that they are irrelevant to you and have no real effect on you
dragonshadow91 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
I may not have been bullied but I have gone through rough times with my parents divorce and moving after only a few years. I admit I have been depressed but if I ever got bullied for it I sure in the hell would even give them the light of day. it may hurt, that is the words that they say. I may kill me in side because of having a sumwhat weak steat of mind but I will never once let them know if it hurt. But my patience will break and I won't be crying I will be laughing at there stupidity that is how I feel =_= (I'm so smart ^-^
N-Cbyrnon Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student General Artist
If I will ever be bullied, I won't waste my voice for the bitches. Not like I'll let myself be bullied ..or I don'even care. Having Alfie would be nice though
ScarletandLunaRcool Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
muuu1234 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014
Oh my god.
I was such a badass. XD
SpringSakura14 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Bitchasschick popped up in my head for RBN XDD
Eternity-Is-Long Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Whenever RBN showed up, I randomly thought, BITCHACHU, I CHOOSE YOU!
SpringSakura14 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Oh my god yes XDDD
Eternity-Is-Long Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Now I can just imagine something like
SpringSakura14 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
XDDD Oh my god, my sides XDD 
Eternity-Is-Long Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SpringSakura14 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
XD Yes, yes it is XDD
SuperShaymin99 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol! XD
HeartTwist Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you, I love this!
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah i love to make people feel horrid before telling them i love em
DragoShadowing Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student Writer
Walking out. Like a badass.

Amazing story, mon ami!
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014
LOL badass as hell XD
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner May 20, 2014
For RBN, I put Bitchalena.
dragonwing710770 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I put bitchzilla XD
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
*hasp* that could be freinds and bith the world together!
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014   Writer
I put "Miley Cirus."
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014

Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014   Writer
Idk why, but in stories that say (insert b*tch name here) that always pops into my mind for some reason....
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
I think of this girl named Ashly.
I don't know why. ♪
ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
same XD
xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD So Did I 
xXKimberIsAwesomeXx Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
Raidioactive-Demon Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I love this. I was annoyed and sick of everyone at my school once and I now have two scars : one on my left hand and one on my right arm. My friends don't allow me long nails anymore....
YellowVixen Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist
another person who's too scared to use knives...... i have three scars on my left arm, but no way in hell can my friends get me to cut my nails. i would bite them if they tried
kinddertoten97 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh My Gawd 
Prado20 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Photographer
Awww kawaii also can I have a request for free please
WoofWooftheKiller Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
its half fluffy half depression I WUB ITTTTTTT
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I don't wanna cry I don't wanna oh who am I kidding I wanna cry :iconamericasadplz: :iconcryplz:
WinLach Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I would be crying if I wasn't in a classroom full of people... ^^'
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