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A/N: cussing, sad stuff dont like dont read
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The next week, Alfred dragged you from your home and back to school. But, not before helping you heal yourself.

-----Flash Back------

A loud knock assulted your door.

"Good Morning _______! It's time to get up!"

You groaned. "Go home Jones!" you shouted back.

He laughed and kicked open your door and waltzed into your bedroom. He lift you up in his arms and kissed your forehead. "There is no time for that now ______! We have a big week planned before you go back to school!"

Your (e/c) snapped open. "What?! I'm not going back there!" you yelled thrashing in his arms. He was unaffected and continued.

"First and for most, I'm going to help you getting your eating habits back on track and but you some *bio oil for your scars."

You scowled and looked away. "Why are you doing this?"

Alfred smiled and kissed you softly. You watched his eyes flutter closed as he pressed his lips harder to your. He pulled away and stared dreamily into your eyes. "Because I love you!" he smiled wide as he watched you blush a light pink.

Alfred let you to go get changed, mentioning something about "grabbing some McD's". You wandered into the bathroom and rummaged around for your diet pills only to find they had been replaced with candy. You growled.

"ALFRED F JONES! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH MY PILLS?!"

You could hear Alfred laugh. "You never needed them so I threw them away!"

You growled in annoyance and felt extremely stressed and self conscience. You went under your sink and searched for your razor blade. It was replaced with a children's play knife. No edge at all.

"GOD DAMN IT JONES!" you shouted while he laughed.

He strolled into the bathroom and hugged you from behind. "You are too beautiful to hurt yourself." He nuzzled into your neck and kissed it softly. "Now c'mon. We have food to eat and eyebrows to see!"

"What do you mean by 'eyebrows'?"

"Arthur! He's been worried about you too." he smiled.

You looked at him dumbfounded. Arthur was worried? seriously? Yes, you two could be considered 'friends' but really.

-------McDonalds Time Skip------

After pigging out on many burgers, Alfred drove you over to Arthurs house. When we got there, Arthur was sitting on his Victorian style porch. He looked up and his green eyes widened. He set down his cup and rushed over to Alfred red volvo. As soon as you got out, he engulfed you in a hug.

"_______, I was so worried about you! I tried calling and going over but you never answered." you shyly wrapped your arms around him. "I'm so sorry I didn't do something sooner." he whispered holding you tighter.

You held back tears and let him hold you. You didn't notice Alfred glaring at Arthur.
The Brit kissed your forehead. "I hope you're feeling better now, love."

You smiled a little. "Thank you..."

---Flash Back End-----
You and Alfred walked down the crowded school hallway. Even after all your attempts to push his arm off of your shoulders, it still found its way around you.

Everyone gave you both strange looks. Including your teachers. You both walked into class and Alfred sat right beside you.

That teacher from last week walked into the room. He saw you and snarled. You don't know why he hated you so much. You were a straight A student and tried not to cause any trouble.

"What are you doing back?" he growled.

You stared at your black shoes.

"Leave her alone you old hack." Alfred spat. The teacher glared at him.

"How dare you talk to me like that Alfred Jones!"

"How dare you take to my girlfriend like that is a better question!" everyone in the room including you gasped. Girlfriend?

The teacher was flabbergasted. "Get out of my classroom! Both of you!" he shouted.

Alfred glared at him and pulled you by your hand out the door, ignoring all the whispered that followed.

---Time Skip-----

Alfred didn't leave your side all day. He griped out anyone who looked at you strangely, and snapped at his friends when they questioned your relationship.

You were currently waiting outside the boys locker room for Alfred so he could get his things from practise. You held your (book of choice) close to your face as you read.

Suddenly it was ripped out of your hands. "Hey!" you complained. You looked up to see the biggest bully in the entire school. (Random Bitch Name) and her gang.

"What the hell are you doing out here you little slut!" (R/B/N) shrieked. You looked at her boredly, unable to take her crap anymore.

"I'm waiting, and I was doing so in peace until you interrupted me. Please leave."

She huffed. "You think you're so hot now that your dating Alfred."

You rolled your eyes at her. "Not really, I'm still the same person."

"So you admit you're a loser!"

"Are fucking deaf?" you asked eerily calm. "The only people around here who call me that are you guys, and I'm fucking tired of it! You are all really stupid aren't you! Fucking whores." they all pulled down them hems of their frilly pink skirts.

"W-whatever! You're still a freak!"

"Says the bitch who's dressed like a pink toilet brush." you sneered. "I'm done with you treating me like crap all the time. I done with it!" you stormed down the hall.

"Where do you think you're going?!" (R/B/N) shouted.

Glared at her then smirked. "Anywhere your fake nose isn't!" and you walked out. Like a badass.

-----Time Skip-------

"_______!" Alfred called you. He huffed as he finally reached you. He heard you fighting with the girls and watched you leave. So on instinct, he followed you.

He grabbed your arm and spun you to face him. He pulled your face to his and pressed his lips to yours. His soft lips melted against yours. He pulled away and held you close.

"_______, I love you. I think, no, I KNOW you are the most beautiful woman I have ever met. I know I have been the biggest hoser on the planet for a long time but I still love you. You're kind and caring. Smart and funny. And your smile is so beautiful it's contagious. Please, I need to know. Do you love me too?"

You stared up to him. Your big (e/c) eyes shone bright and glistened with tears. He had done so much for you in this past week. He told off his friends for you, stayed with you, held your hand in front of others and he let you cry on his shoulder when you were sad.

You let your arms wrap around his neck and pulled him into a kiss. He smiled into it and held you tighter. For once, you kissed him back. Your lips moved in sync with each others. When you finally broke the kiss you stared into his baby blue eyes.

"Alfred F Jones, you are probably the biggest asshole I have ever met." His face fell. "You tormented me for so many years that I nearly killed myself." He looked on the verge of tears. "But, you were also the only one to really try to help me, get to know me and heal my scars. I can never forget all those terrible years, but I sure can ignore them for the good ones." you took his face in your hands. HIs grip around your waist tightened. "Alfred F Jones, I believe I'm in love with you."

He smiled so wide you thought it might get stuck like that. Alfred lifted you off your feet and spun you in a circle while smashing his lips to yours.

“The truth is, unless you let go, unless you forgive yourself, unless you forgive the situation, unless you realize that the situation is over, you cannot move forward.”
― Steve Maraboli, Life, the Truth, and Being Free
UGGGGH this took me forever to do. I got another job so I'm like everywhere right now. So much to do! Thank you all for requesting a sequel! so awesome of you sorry if its not as good!

If you follow my hetalia x child! Venice! Reader the second part will be up this week

i own nothing but the plot line
:iconsexyamerica2plz: owns you!

thanks again!
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ThisThing8 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred F. Jones! i LOVE you!!!!!!!! with a big LOVE! :la:
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PrussianGamer101 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member
Alfred F Jones I BELIEVE I am NOT in love with you.
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Othelle Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  New member
What kind of teen has a fake nose? I'm fabulous, bitches. And apparently a badass, too! Yay!
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ohmygoskjackfrost Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
nice..
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  New member
The random bitch name is well...







bish and AT LEST I DONT WALK AROUND LIKE A PINK TOILET BRUSH XDD DAMN THAT COMMENT DO!!
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Prussia22 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  New member
Walking out like a badass
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Ahhh, retards. Can't understand why they bother going to school. And I DEFINITELY do not mean any of you. I mean people like the girl who said I was ruining her life after i apologized for accidentally stepping on her backpack. I want to murder her. BRUTALLY. And I'm talking the most brutal way possible. So brutal, it can't be written here. Of course that shouldn't be a threat to you guys. Don't worry about me! Let me sit in the corner, slowly losing my sanity like 2p England.
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artisticwolfgirl14 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was 2inches in this b!tches space by accident, I tried to move out of her way. She insulted me, she thought it was an insult but calling me "yeah you better walk away redhead" That is such an insult: sarcasm:... OMG THAT LAST PART LOSING SANITY LIKE 2P ENGLAND!!!!
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I still have my sanity. It's going away slowly because of people like the girl you mentioned. I think the people at my school are worse. Last year some guy PURPOSELY brought prescription pills and gave them to other kids who would actually take them. The police had to come in and he was expelled but he's back now. Not to mention unlike last year there was a a gas leak this year so we had to go to the other part of the building that is safer. I go to a school that has three different schools in one building.
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Prussia22 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  New member
I would be pissed off at her
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student Digital Artist
The worst my anger has ever gone to is yelling and pinching though. The only way to make me end up punching someone is if you hit me too much. Besides, at my school, in my opinion, if you make me, the girl who actually likes being friends with people and is normally happy and doesn't want violence, get angry and not like you at all, then you're done for. I'm considered a creepy freaky loser here. Good thing is people still like being my friends. Making the loser of a school hate you means bad news. At least nowadays though.
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  New member
My life is ok I guess I have a little group of friends but the popular plp talk behind other plus back so they think I'm fat so I'm anorexic for that so I weigh at least 70 pounds 4 a 15 year old i somtime 2 the point I get angry i ethier kick the person in da balls if it's a boy of punh some1 in da boobs 4 girl or boy
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Damn dude. Over here where I go, apparently if you accidentally step on a person's backpack, especially some girl, they'll have a grudge against you and hate you for the rest of the year, even if you say sorry!
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  New member
Wow I friend U cus AWSOMNESS
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cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yay, more friends!



You become friend with me, da?
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Deceivertale Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Plot twist: Al is just playing around (maybe). Then eyebrows suspect this and took reader'-chan away from him. and so start Alfred x Reader x Eyebrows
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finnfni Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
thst third to last paragraph XD
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iNSaNiTYisAmazing Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
This was a good story and kind of reminds me of humans at my school because I'm the "Fake anorexic freak" ( I'm not even anorexic if anything I eat to much.... I just don't gain weight correctly ) and "Emo attention whore" and have nearly killed myself 


But guess who stood up for herself by just screaming "FUCK YOU ALL IM A FAB BITCH AND YOU ARE WANNABES" and then someone tried to kill me :\ AND PEOPLE WONDER WHY I HATE HUMANS
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Lois10Phantomhive Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
The same goes for me. I was always called names until I snapped and they always wondered where the new sadistic side of me came from.
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iNSaNiTYisAmazing Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I got in trouble for flipping someone off for saying I'm not human
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Lois10Phantomhive Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015
For me, when someone says that I am not human, I take it as a compliment when I'm angry. When I just want to burst in anger, I just can't do it anymore and my faith in humanity is then diminished once more. All because of humans, stupid, annoying, inconsiderate, humans.
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iNSaNiTYisAmazing Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I just flipped him off because he deserves it
- says I'm a confused faggot cause I'm bi-
- is a total ass to my friends
- DOESNT GET IN ANY TROUBLE
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Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Yay I am so happy that the girl snapped at the bitches! But how come Alfie suddenly loved the girl? I mean, he has bullied her for so many years!
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PrussianGamer101 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member
HE WAS BEING A FUCKING BITCH FOR POPULARITY!!! And THEN, JUST THEN he realized what he had done JUST WHEN he saw the evidince he took it to far.

I hate how American Schools have bullies that abuse people just for popularity.
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FairyTail110 Featured By Owner Edited Feb 22, 2015
I love this story! I used to be bullied because I was mentally different, not mentally challenged but different. They used to call me nerd, crazy cat lady (even though I hate cats), and they used to call me a demon. But now I have friends that support me through this and yes they are my friends! They care so much for me as they do for one another, and for those who are bullied those people who bully you don't know who you really are they don't know how awesome you can be. 
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad everything worked out for you! You are a beautiful person and no one has the right to say otherwise 
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Mentally different? Might I be reading the comment of another person with Aspergers/Autism? Or am I wrong? In which case, ignore this.
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iNSaNiTYisAmazing Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was told this "If you don't end up killing yourself even though you should you will be that crazy old lady with two hundred cats and belongs in a mental hospital" ._. And sometimes people don't understand why I hate humane
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insanity011 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
i loved this story
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Hetalia123Harmony Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I cried, no seriously...
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Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
For (R/B/N)

I chose TheHomoWhoCan'tMindHerOwnDamnedBitchyBusiness.


Yes, I chose that.
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MyDepictionOfFiction Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I chose Atrocity
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iNSaNiTYisAmazing Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I named her
HiMtNameIsSlutAndIamATotalBitchWhoYouShouldFuckBecauseImAslut
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Kagemiya-san Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015
I named her ThatOneWhore
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nightmareDLuna Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015
I choose TheFukingStupidLittleBitchWhoHadSuckEveryGuyToBePopularAndHadSexWithTeacherToHaveGoodGrades.
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Student Artist
The name is... PERFECT
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Dafug is that icon blood????
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Student Artist
France,
he doesn't want Iggy to burn down his kitchen 
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
that looks like wade dressed up as a girl XD (wade is aka lordminion777 or markipliers friend the are youtubers)
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Artist
X3
(( i know who wade is i watch his videos X3))
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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:iconbloodpaw221:
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Artist
X3
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Paralyzed-Chan Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015
Thank youu~
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Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Student Artist
your welcome~ c:
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NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Filmographer
I used to get bullied T^T
People calling me chipmunk because im a bit tan and have chubbier cheeks than them...
But this story made my day ^-^!
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ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
Its ok coz ur special I get called stupid by my bff coz I'm random but I'm smart they just can't see past the wall...
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NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student Filmographer
Im pretty sure u are smart ^^
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ramendangosenbei Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015
That's what they all say but don't let em get you down ^^
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NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Student Filmographer
Awwie ur so fluffy
^^
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Rivulets-of-Blood Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, after that last comment in part 1 of this story, and after I stopped tearing up, I've finally calmed down enough to assess this story properly! ... All I can say is how much I love this story. It's empowering in its own right and inspiring as well. And I love how well it reflects on every day situations many people have to go through, hanging in the precarious balance between suicide and plain hatred. Because though I've bullied, though not to this extremity, I understand just how much pain people go through to this day. And because I have personal experience of self-hate and suicidal thoughts, though not the cutting because it scares me to death, I have a thorough appreciation and love for this story. Keep working your magic my friend!

:sad:  :crying: rvmp .........:( (Sad) :| (Blank Stare) :) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) 
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