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Hetalia  x Child! Venice! Reader

You were wandering the cold streets of Rome. You had no idea how you got there, where to go or what to do. As a toddler, you were mortified.

As you stumbled around the city, you came across a small Italian restaurant. Oh how you longed for something to fill your stomach! You ran over to the back door of the restaurant, you little (h/c) curl bouncing as you toddled.

Finally reaching the door you were a little shaking but you tried to knock. TRIED. You were just going up to the door when you heard yelling and someone panicking in Italian. The large metal door swung open to reveal two men. One had dark chocolate brown hair and deep eyes. He was really loud and swearing a lot. He had a major scowl on his face that kind of scared you. The other had a lighter version of hair color with a tint of red. He seemed to be fumbling with a garbage bag while the loud one yelled at him. But what really caught your eye were that each of them had a strange curl, just like yours.

"Stupid bastardo! I told you to take the garbage out 2 hours ago and I find you napping?!" yelled the loud one. They didn't seem to notice you at all.

"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Germany had us training late!" blubbered the light haired one. You were slowly stepping back only to fumble over your two bare feet. You bumped into a garbage can which made an obscene amount of noise. The two men looked over to you with shocked expressions.

"M-mi dispiace!" you squeaked trying to stand. The two looked at each other than back to you.

"Ve~ ciao bambina! What are you doing out here?" asked the light haired one coming towards you and helping you up.

You cutely tiltied your head to the side making your curl fall infront of your face.

He realized you could'nt speak english and repeated in italian.

You sniffled as innocent tears filled your big (e/c) orbs. " Io non lo so! Mi sono svegliato qui e mi sono perso e spaventato! [I don't know! I woke up out here and I'm lost and scared!]" you cried flinging yourself into the man arms. He smelt like tomato's and pasta.

"Fratello, look at her hair." said the one with the dark hair. The man turned to you to see you had a curl just like them. "I think she's one of us."

"Ve~! I think so too!" said the man with the light hair. He looked back to you with a big smile.
"Bella! My name is Italy or Feliciano and mi fratello is Romano or Lovino!" he said in Italian. "What's your name bambina?" he asked scooping you up in his arms and hugging you.

" Il mio nome è _______ ummm io sono la città di Venezia! Questo è quello che dice è la mia collana n. [My name is ummm _______ I'm the city of Venice! Thats what is says n my necklace.]" you said whipping the last of your tears away. You showed them the necklace that had everything about you on it. Their eyes widened and italy smiled wide.

"Sorella! [sister!]" he cried with joy. He lifted you up and spinning you around you happiness. Even the man with the scowl smiled a little and pat your head.

You smiled. You finally found a family!  You giggled as you were carried inside. Romano yelled at everyone in the restaurant to go away as he closed up.

"Italy! Come on! ve have training to do!" shouted a loud voice. You gasped and hid in your fratello's shirt, shaking.

"It's okay sorella! That's just Germany! He sounds mean but he's my best friend!" Italy said stroking your hair, trying to calm you down.

A tall German man made his way into the living area where you and Italy were. He had slicked back blonde hair and hard blue eyes. He stopped short when he saw you.

"Italy! Vhat did I tell you about inviting random children off the street to come and play?! Remember vhat happened last time?!" he yelled taking you from him.

You panicked. "F-fratello!" you cried squirming in the tall mans grasp. He froze and thought 'Doesn't fratello mean brother?'

He was about release you and give you back to your now crying older brother when a tomato was flung at his head; which he barely dodged.

"Hands off our sorellina damn potato bastard!" shouted Romano whipping another tomato his way.

"Ja! Ja! I'm letting go! I'm sorry!" he put you back in Italy's warm embrace. He crouched down lower and made eye contact with your tense (e/c) eyes. "I'm sorry about zhat frau," he held out a hand to you and you took it without hesitation, which surprised him being the sister of the two most easily frightened country on Earth. "Germany." he said curtly.

You took him in for a moment before deciding he was good. You smiled at him and shouted "Zio Germany!"

"What the crapola!" shouted big brother Romano. "Not the potato bastard!" he cried. You giggled at his disappointment.

"Ve~ Germany, this is our little sister Venice! Or ______." Italy said happily. Germany nodded and gave you a small smile. He glanced over at the slowly (and dramatically) dying Romano making his way to the ground. You giggled and ran over to him, hugging his leg. Your head barely reaching his knee.

He screeched in surprised making you squeal in laughter. He picked you up and tried to keep the scowl on his face. But it wasn't working for him.

"Hm, it already getting late." Germany stated heading for the door. "You may miss training today because you reunited with your sister. But vill be there tomorrow at zhe meeting!" he walked out of the door.

"Oh no! What will we do with _____?" Italy asked.
Romano thought for a minute then looked at you in his arms. Your big (e/c) eyes beginning to close. He blushed as you snuggled into his chest. "We'll take her with us. If anything, the tomato bastard can look after her there. Besides, everyone should know we finally found our little Veniza." Italy nodded in agreement. He smiled at the small girl now happily snoozing in his arms and pecked her forehead.

"Welcome home sorella."
2 FANFICS IN ONE DAY?! :iconcraycrayplz:
this was the series i was talking about beofore! so pretty much, you are the adorable city of venice and are italy and romano's sister (yes i know you should have been one of their kids but just roll with it) i hope you enjoy it!
:iconylime-cxii: :iconsaysplz: zio GERMANY!!
:icongermanyfacepalmplz: :iconsaysplz: mien gott...
i own nothing but zhe plot line!
:iconitalyplz: and :iconromanoplz: own you!

part 2!!! [link]
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:iconashelekat:
AsheLeKat Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
The funny thing is my main OC is actually Venice XD
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:iconkagemiya-san:
Kagemiya-san Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  New member
I FINALLY HAVE A CURL
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:iconhetalianprincess12:
Hetalianprincess12 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
*eats Tomato* I am glad to be italian!
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AncPikachu Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Cx
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GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
This story starts off, ADORABLE! :3
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:iconwifeoflithuaniassis:
WifeOfLithuaniasSis Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015
Nawww! 
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Siciliart Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  New member
Kawaii >3</ she look like my little sister *^*
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:icontheotakugurl:
theotakugurl Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  New member Student General Artist
Awwww! This 'Venice' character for reader-chan is so adorable!!! :D
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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GERMANY YOU MEANIE!!!!!!
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FRANCEISWONDERFUL2 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014
UNCLE GERMANY!!! UNCLE GERMANY!!! UNCLE GERMANY!!! I want PAAAAASTAAAAAAAAAA~ GRANDE FRATELLO LOVINO!! GRANDE FRATELLO LOVINO!!! GRANDE FRATELLO LOVINO!!! Potato? GRANDE FRATELLO FELICIANO!!! GRANDE FRATELLO FELICIANO!!! GRANDE FRATELLO FELICIANO!!! *holding a rat* isn't it adorable (( >:D Yas I'm going to be one of those sorellina!!! muhahaha NESSUNO MI PUO FERMARE!!!!
 NESSUNO!!
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cancerleovirgo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
fuckin germany!
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:iconally-luvs-hetalia:
Ally-luvs-HETALIA Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2014
awwwwwwwwe
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:iconhowaboutfuckoff:
howaboutfuckoff Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww! So frickin' kawaii!
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
my Hetalia person is Venice........hehehehehhe cute doe!
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:iconbloodycherryblossom1:
So cute 
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:iconphoenixninja66:
PhoenixNinja66 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Is Germany shining bright like a.....DOITSU?
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014   Writer
Lawl i make that joke everyday:

 Keep calm and shine bright like a doitsu
Have u been shining bright like a doitsu

Friend: How did u do that??!!!
Me: i just shine bright like a doitsu ^3^
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PhoenixNinja66 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD ikr?! Even today my human geography teacher asked me a question about what we should do about yadda yadda yadda. And I said "Welllll...we must shine bright like a DOITSU. Like Germans in the sky" and my teacher came to me and gave me a high five and said "You're correct. EVERYONE WE MUST SHINE BRIGHT LIKE A DOITSU!" And it was PERFECT
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I want  HISTORY TEACHER LIKE THAT.
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:iconphoenixninja66:
PhoenixNinja66 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
YES. He's really funny
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:iconlailabuscus:
LailaBuscus Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
LUCKYYY.
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:iconcomedywiz411:
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014   Writer
lucky... all the times i do that i just play it off and go like: :iconitalyplz:
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:iconphoenixninja66:
PhoenixNinja66 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol. XD
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:iconrosemayliegottschalk:
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
What the own!?!??!
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:icongentgenocide:
GentGenocide Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
/screams/ HOW CUTE
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:iconzeawsumperson1:
ZEAWSUMPERSON1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Roma: NOOOOOO!!!!WHY?! WHY?!
Me: heheh.....
Roma: NOOOoooooooo.....!noooo 
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cupcakecreep2p Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Student General Artist
LOL  I really do have a curl and the rest of my hair is strait XD 
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
So is mine but it comes at the end of my bangs.
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:iconcupcakecreep2p:
cupcakecreep2p Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Mine full on sticks out the side of my head so I have too pin it back every day
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014
Why? You could go around and tell people that your a girl version of Italy and confuse them!
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cupcakecreep2p Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Lol I hide it because all my friends are hetalians so they always pull it ... not like it does anything it just hurts having my hair pulled 
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:iconanimepanther921:
AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014
Oh.... LUCKY I WANT A HETALIAN FRIEND!!
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radhoneycake Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
yeah mi family Italy Stops Romano (Huggy) [V1] 
but what happen last time when italy bring a kid from the streets?????
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
we don't discuss that anymore....
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ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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ibrose12 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Italy (Epic Waving) [V1] :iconsaysplz: Ve~ so-a cuteee


:iconibrose12: :iconsaysplz: Agreed Italy Pikachu (Agrees) [V1] 
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:iconikethecool:
IketheCOOL Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
"Italy! Vhat did I tell you about inviting random children off the street to come and play?! Remember vhat happened last time?!"

I died.
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:iconrrbzrulez:
Rrbzrulez Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
che meraviglia!Italy (Globe Dance) [V2] 
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oddly enough I'm a mixture of Italy and Romano, and I have an Italy curl like Romano. I tend to curse like Romano when someone pulls it, and I tend to take siesta's like Italy. My favorite food is pasta, tomatoes, and pizza..... Oh well it's just a coincidence!
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:iconask-me-and-my-2p:
ask-me-and-my-2p Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Student General Artist
…or is it?!
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Smiledogjpeg Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont know. * adorable face*
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daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Professional Artist
yayromanoplz
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daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Professional Artist
(yayromanoplz)
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awsomesister45 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
:iconyayromanoplz:
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HetaliaRagazza Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
😄 Ok *laughs* ok; I look almost if not exactly like Belgium (if she were real); I am almost always happy; I try not to cuss, I fail some times; I have a natural hair curl (although it looks more like America's); I come off a bit shy, but get over it quickly; hate getting/watching others get hurt; I like pasta, but watermelon is my favorite food; and could translate all of the Italian you used. I'm not sure what to make of it...😅
"Zio Germania!"😃
wait, how does that work?! Oh well, it is "awesome like Prussia" anyway!😆
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mariekale587 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
this is sssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! o:-)
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:iconask-venice-italy:
Ask-Venice-Italy Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awww, this is adorable. I shall read more! ^^
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CanadaWannaBeFriend Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YES!!!! I NOW HAVE THE BEST BROS EVER!!!!! :D XD X3
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MotherRussia-andMe Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
This is super cute! I should go to bed but it's still Friday!
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Hispanicgirl1313 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student General Artist
My frenemy says that I really love tomatoes and hate potatoes my hyperactive classmate. But I cuss a lot and I'm really cheerful. WTF, am I really their lost sister or is this just coincidence?!
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