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You thrashed in the man's arms in a panic.

He tried covering your screaming mouth but you bit his hand.

"Owww!" he whined. "That wasn't nice ________!" he continued.

You began sobbing uncontrollably. Shouting for your brothers. This Romano wanna be got into a large black car. Inside, you saw another man that resembled Italy. But his hair was a darker shade of red and he had violet eyes. Not to mention he looked so scary that one glance his way guaranteed you nightmares.


"Ah, you found her!" the Italy copy said with a grin. He reached out for you but you backed away.

"Where are my brothers you meanies!" you shouted.

"Oh silly little ________," the other Italy leaned in close to your face. "We are your brothers."

"Are not!" you shouted childishly.

"Are too!"  fake Romano shouted back.

The both of you went at it for a few minutes before fake Italy had enough.

"Both of you shut up!" he hissed. He sighed and pinched the bridge of his nose. "My name is Luciano. I am Italy's second persona. That happy go lucky nut bar," he gestured to the blonde. "Is Romano's second persona, Flavio."

"I don't believe you!" you stated in a huff.

Luciano growled.  "Driver, step on it!"

-------1p POV---------

Romano was getting tense. It had been 15 minutes since you left to go get a drink.

He ever so kindly excused himself from the table. "I'll be back bastardo's."

"_________?" he called. "__________?" His olive eyes glanced out of the window to see you and his 2p!. His 2p! placed you in a black Porsche and stepped in after.

He raced down the stairs and out the UN doors. "_________!" he shouted he ran towards the car as it began speeding away. "Fuck!" He shouted. Italy came tumbling outside at the sound of his brothers voice.

"They have her!" the elder brother shouted. He turned to his younger and fell to his knees "The 2p!'s took ________!"

Italy stood. Shocked into silence. Yet, tears still managed to fall from his honey eyes as he stood stalk still.

The other countries flooded into the parking lot. Spain came over to Romano and hugged him. For one, the italian did not push him away, but pulled him closer.

The brothers briefed everyone on what happened.

"We have to find her!" said Denmark slamming his fist against the meeting room table. Everyone gathered back inside to formulate a plan to get you back. Lord knows what Luciano's crew will do to you. Especially Lutz. A shiver ran down their spines at the thought.

"If that 2p! potato bastard even breaths on our sorellina I will rip out his lungs and make him eat them!" Romano shouted in protest. Everyone looked slightly afraid of him.

"We need a plan!" America shouted over everyone, taking charge. It was strange for him to actually take control like this.

The cowlicked man pinned up a large map of the city. "They couldn't have gotten that far. Knowing Flavio, he will want to stop for coffee or something," he started to draw lines all over the map.

England and France came to look over his shoulder along with the other Allies. "What if he doesn't-" England started but America shushed him.

"Okay dudes! So we will infiltrate their headquarters right? Then we, as in us Allies, will get inside and will shoot the bad guys like 'pew pew! bang!'-" England smacked him upside the head.

"Focus you twat!"

America laughed nervously. "R-right!" he continued. "The you Axis people get _______ and you Nordic people watch the area and the rest of you too! Help if they try to escape with _______!"

Germany growled in frustration, tried of just hanging back. "Small problem. We don't know where they are!" he shouted.

"Oh...yeah..." America pouted.  

"I have a solution." Austria said calmly, standing from his seat.

"We don't need your fucking help!!" Romano practically screamed. He bolted up from his seat and knocked over his large oak chair.

Austria sighed. "I understand that in the past, I had done something unforgivable to Venice," he looked the Italian brothers dead in the eyes. "But now, I have a way to redeem myself in a way. Please, I can help her."

Romano was panting with rage. Italy came over and gave him a reassuring pat on the shoulder. Romano seated himself and growled low in the back of his throat. "Fine. Speak piano bastard."
Hey everyone! So I am back and ready for action. Not really Here is ch6!!

I own nothing but the plot line! and you belong to various sexy men ;)

CHAPTER 7 EVERYONE! fav.me/d7wov58
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:iconchica105:
chica105 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  New member Hobbyist Photographer
I BELONG TO NO ONE EXCEPT GERMANY ,MY DAD, ANDCANADA
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  New member Student General Artist
Ha! A perfect nickname for Austria! :D
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Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol. Piano bastard. :D
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FRANCEISWONDERFUL2 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  New member
(( haha~ I called him Piano Bastard first!! >:D ))
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AUSTRIAIHAVENTFORGOTTENTHATSCARISWEARIFYOURPLANGETSMEHURTORKILLEDIWILLHAUNTYOURASSASAGHOSTFROMTHISLIFETOTHENEXT.
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s1mr4n Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
they lay a fuckin' lay a hand on me..........im screwed 
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Bluemoonteardrop134 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
Oh no! It's the 2p 😫
Hehehe *whispers* the 2p are awesome😆
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AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
Piano bastard....? HAHAHAHAHAH AAAAAANNNNNDDDD....................... I'M DEAD!
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Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
England called alfie a twat

OH MY GOD IM ROLLING
HELP
ITS TOO FUNNY
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HetaliaRussiaFan Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
I'm screwed, oh so very screwed.
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link :) fav.me/d7wov58
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DolphinSarah123 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
1 l0v3 1t!!! N3XT PL3A53!!!
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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kittyninja1212 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
Next one please~!!!
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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kittyninja1212 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
The link does not work :(
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nnooooooooooooooooo. Sorry hun! If you go back to ch 6 the proper link that should work will be in the description! Sorry again!
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kittyninja1212 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Alright~!
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WannaBeATomato Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
:iconseagullplz: More
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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Reyalover Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Artist
When is chapter 7 going up if it's up plz give me the link to it plz btw your stories are amazing
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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MIZlovestacos Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *marks off how many times I've been captured by a 2p* That makes 27 times........dem 2ps luv meh...APH: Onion Cuba :D 


:kidnap: (Blue is me Pink is a 2p)
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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LightElf2001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ikr!!! I love the 2ps (only a few-_-) but getting captured by them is getting used...
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queenfreak28 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
OMG!! what happens to venice??!!!! more please!!!
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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queenfreak28 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
yay!thank u!!!!
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MONKEYPOOOO Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
MOAAAARRR! MOAAAAAAARRRRRR! WAAAAAA! I WANT MOAAAAARRRR!
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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When is the next chapter going up??
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
by the end of this week
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iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Is it up yet?!
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annaelsa9 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Moar! Please?
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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annaelsa9 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
YAY ^^
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Hashtagpeople Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
Must have  more
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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AnimeOtaku890475 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope you can update soon. I really enjoy your story.
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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madame-North Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
Moar!!!!.... And... Can I use Venice's idea for my fanfic?
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ch 7 of Hetalia x child! Venice! Reader is out here is the link fav.me/d7wov58
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah you do you man :)
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madame-North Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Im kinda stuck. I'm kinda asking you for advice on this one. Should I post my fanfic in 1st or 2nd person?
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I find first person easier, but 2nd person is always more common and makes the reader feel more like their in the story and that someone is portraying whats happening y'know? ie: I went to the park yesterday with Italy or Yesterday, you (or (y/n) depending on preference) went to the park. It's all up to what you are more comfortable writing :)
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madame-North Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
This is between us, right?
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
of course!
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madame-North Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
Would you like to hear my prologue?
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ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
definitely! 
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